30 men with ladies two
Gathered for a festive do.
Dressed quite formal, black and white,
Yet movement turned to nasty fight.

What's going on?

Hmmmmmm, a little rewrite might get around Dan's concerns (although I rather like his answer), With Apologies to Popstar Dave (and to anyone who finds my abuse of the urban venacular offensive), how about this version:

26 gangstas wit dey cribs and hos
all showing colors, some wit’out clothes
its all real quiet, not a lotta sound,
but once they get started, folks goin’ down

Posted by FatBoy on 2003-11-12 12:40:49