30 men with ladies two
Gathered for a festive do.
Dressed quite formal, black and white,
Yet movement turned to nasty fight.
What's going on?
Hmmmmmm, a little rewrite might get around Dan's concerns (although I rather like his answer), With Apologies to Popstar Dave
(and to anyone who finds my abuse of the urban venacular offensive), how about
this version:
26 gangstas wit dey cribs and hos
all showing colors, some wit’out clothes
its all real quiet, not a lotta sound,
but once they get started, folks goin’ down
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Posted by FatBoy
on 2003-11-12 12:40:49 |