What's wrong with this seemingly fine paragraph? It may look fine when you
you read it over hastily, but there is actually something wrong with it. It's not
not too hard to spot, and may surprise you if you are trying to read this over
over quickly without being as observant a reader as you really should be and
and not paying much attention. What is it?

its the repeated words..... it may seem siple but you're right if you look over the paragraph too hastily than you wont pick up up on the mistakes.

Posted by silentcriesralwaysignored on 2005-08-25 06:39:24